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I did not change my elevator pitch at all for a couple reasons. Most of the feedback I received was generally positive and I felt as if I did not need to change anything. For those few comments that did suggest a change, I disagreed with them. One comment told me to add in housing options to my elevator pitch. Housing, however, was never part of my product and thus I did not feel like I needed to add that. Some people thought it still should have been a little bit longer. I explained though in my previous post that the short length of the pitch was by design. I had no intention of making it longer. I am quite satisfied with the way my pitch turned out.
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ReplyDeleteI think that you have a good pitch and that you could go very far in making the service a real business. I think that you could have changed up a little of the enthusiasm you could have changed up the way you say things to make it pop even more but that is about it.